Posted by satsu (host86-156-59-99.range86-156.btcentralplus.com | 86.156.59.99) on November 02, 2008 at 14:01:00:
In Reply to: Feda Spot Translation Clarification Request (fairly long) - Final part of Area (Chapter 1) posted by Wildbill on November 01, 2008 at 21:26:12:
> What we're looking for here are attitudes and tones. How does the party feel about the master priest? How does the priest feel about the party? The temple is sealed against Empire strikes, so everyone could remain there and stay safe. But the priest, obviously, has his own agenda. So, does the party shift its posture away from selfish motives and more toward altruism, or does the priest inveigle them into the cause? What is REALLY going down in the master priest's chamber? It's important to the total story evolution, to know.
>
>
>
> This is lengthy, even with repeats removed, but these
> passages are critical because they conclude Chapter
> (Area) 1.
>
> They also account for the fate of the Bazel Villagers,
> provide a new member of the party, and set the tone for
> the rest of the game (11 more chapters to go).
>
> Unfortunately, our translated script is not clear in
> many of these scenes. Further muddying the water is
> the possibilty of an alternative (tragic) outcome in Bezel
> Village. The good outcome (Path 1) rescues the townspeople.
>
> The alternative outcome (Path 2) has the Empire
> overrunning the town, leaving the fate of the
> residents unknown, for the present, at least.
>
> Well,
>
>
> (00000E16)
> ; 村人たちは
> ; 神殿のひろまにいるはずだ
>
> This is a priest walking around
> in the temple lobby. (Path-1)
> (Must be? Doesn't sound right.)
>
> .TEXT
> The villagers must be in the temple hall.
> .ENDT
>
>
>
>
> (00000E2B)
> ; ようこそ我が神殿へ
> ; 老師-lがおまちしております
>
> Same man (Path-2)
>
> .TEXT
> This old priest welcomes you to
> the temple.
> .ENDT
>
Welcome to our temple. The senior priest awaits you.
>
> (00000E6B)
> ;
>
> This is someone blocking a holding area
> the hero can't enter. (Path-1)
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (New Screen)
> ; はやく老師-lのところへ
> ; 行ってください
>
> This is the same person as above. (Path-2)
>
> .TEXT
> Hurry, please get to the priest.
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (New Screen)
> ; みなさまに会うのを ３カ月前から
> ; たのしみにしていました
>
> This is the second person blocking the
> temple holding area (Path-1)
>
> .TEXT
> I've really had fun these last 3
> months. Since I've met everyone,
> I have had a lot of fun.
> .ENDT
>
>
>
I've been looking forward to meeting you this past three months.
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; 知っているんだ？
>
> This is Ain Speaking.
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
How did you know we would come?
>
> (New Screen)
>
> ;
> ; その老師とかいう人に
> ; 会いにいこう
>
> This is the hero speaking.
>
> .TEXT
>
> that guy was talking about early.
> .ENDT
>
Anyway, let's go see this "senior priest" guy.
>
> (00000EDF)
> ;
> ; ファウストのぼう-・..
>
> This is a person blocking the temple's
> holding area (Path-2) Never heard of
> "Faust" up to this point in game.
>
> .TEXT
>
> about Faust's spirit...
> .ENDT
>
Japanese is garbled so I can't quite make this out reliably, but I'm guessing:
You must be the spirit of Faust the senior priest was talking about--
>
> (New Screen)
> ; いや しつれい
> ; 老師-lがおまちです
>
> Another person in the lower temple.
>
> .TEXT
> Well, see you later. This is the
> priest's place.
> .ENDT
>
>
No, excuse me. Please, the senior priest is waiting.
>
> (00000F13)
> ; ここにいれば帝国軍も
> ; 手は出せまい
>
> Another person blocking way to
> holding area, sounds odd. (both Path 1 and 2)
>
> .TEXT
> If we let you in here, it would
> attract the hand of the
> Imperial Army.
> .ENDT
>
Not even the Imperial Army will attack you as long as you stay here.
>
> (00000F26)
> ; <$8F510028>おくのひろまに村人たちがいる
> ; 見てきたらどうだ？
>
> A question by the stairwat guard... doesn't
> make sense...
>
> .TEXT
> <$8F510028>Would it be all right for
> the villagers to be in the
> inner hall?
> .ENDT
>
The villagers are in the inner hall. Why not go see them?
>
> (00000F43) [NULL]
> ; 老師-lに会う前に
> ; もう少し 神殿を見てきたらどうだ
>
> This is spoken to the guard of the
> stairway that leads to the master priest.
>
> .TEXT
> Before we meet the priest, would
> it be all right for me to
> see the temple a bit more?
> .ENDT
>
Why not see the temple some more before meeting the senior priest?
>
> (00000F5E)
> ; 老師-lは貴殿らを待っているぞ
> ; 会いに行くか？
>
> Same guard as above.
>
> .TEXT
> The priest awaits you. Won't you
> go see him?
> .ENDT
>
The senior priest's waiting for you. Will you go see him?
>
> (00000F77)
> ; この上だ...
>
> The guard points at the steps leading to
> the master priest - obvious, for once.
>
> .TEXT
> Up here...
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (00000F7E)
> ; 神殿内をみてまわるなら
> ; なるべくしずかにな...
>
> The guard of the steps asks for decorum.
>
> .TEXT
> If you return to see the temple,
> please be as quiet as you can...
> .ENDT
>
If you're going sightseeing in the temple, try and do it quietly...
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; にがてだぜ...
>
> Ain is uncomfortable with the temple, but
> it could be worded more clearly.
>
> .TEXT
>
> places like this...
> .ENDT
>
>
I don't feel too comfortable in places like this...
> (00000FD4)
> ;
> ; よけいな血を見ずにすんだ
> ; ようじゃな
>
> The master priest commends the party. (Path 1)
>
> .TEXT
>
> unnecessary blood was spilled.
> Great job, guys.
> .ENDT
It seems that thanks to your effects, no unnecessary blood was spilled.
>
> (00000FF2)
> ;
>
> The master priest's opening comment (path 2),
> doesn't sound right.
>
> .TEXT
>
> place!
> .ENDT
>
>
You've done well to make it here unharmed!
>
> (00001008)
> ;
> ; さわぎをおこしてしまった...
>
> The hero's response, again... vague. (both paths)
>
> .TEXT
>
> We've caused a disturbance...
> .ENDT
>
No, we just started a disturbance...
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; うん-ｽで・ろう
>
> Priest responds - vague, but may fit. (both paths)
>
> .TEXT
>
> probably your destiny.
> .ENDT
>
What you started was fate.
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
>
> Hero reticent
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; 見うけるが
>
> Priest continues... (both paths)
>
> .TEXT
>
> the past, but...
> .ENDT
>
I see you have experienced your share of suffering in the past.
>
> (New Screen)
> ; <$8F6E00_name>さんと
> ; おっしゃったかな<$8F571E_pause>
> ; いい-ﾚをしている
>
> Priest speaking, unclear...
>
> .TEXT
> I wonder, what <$8F6E00_name> spoke
> of when he said...
> .ENDT
>
Your name is [Name], correct? I like the look in your [eyes]. (Jp garbled, so I had to guess)
>
> (New Screen)
> ; その-ﾚは このつらい時の
> ; -]をうつしているぞ
>
> Priest continues, unclear...
>
> .TEXT
> "Your eyes reflect the
> hope in these difficult times."
> .ENDT
>
Those [eyes] reflect these awful times.
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; おっしゃることがわかりませんが？
>
> Hero asks a question. Vague...
>
> .TEXT
>
> I was talking about?
> .ENDT
>
Priest, I am afraid I do not understand what you mean.
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; ときに アンデラ・バルザークと
> ; アルカディア解放軍を知っておるか？
>
> Priest answers, then begans talking about a rebel leader,
> but question is vague.
>
> .TEXT
>
> know of Andera Balzark and
> the Arcadia Liberation Army?
> .ENDT
>
Well, never mind. By the way, do you know of Andera Balzac and the Arcadian Liberation Army?
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
>
> Hero answers, but vague.
>
> .TEXT
>
> Liberation Army, but...
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; じじいは元気だと 伝えてくれい
>
> Priest says to say, "Hi" to rebel leader?
>
> .TEXT
>
> greetings to him from his
> "old man".
> .ENDT
>
Pretty much.
> (New Screen)
> ;
>
> Hero says he will.
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (00001104)
> ;
>
> Priest asked Elle [name-17] if (s)he wants to enter.
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
[Name], are you there?
>
> (0000110F)
> ;
>
> Ellie says yes.
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
>
>
> (00001115)
> ;
> ; <$8F6E17_name>ともうす
>
> Is Elle a man or a woman?
>
> .TEXT
>
> <$8F6E17_name>.
> .ENDT
>
This is my attendant, [Name].
>
> (New Screen)
> ; ・んたの部隊で 自ゆうに使って
> ; くれんか？
> ; <$8F571E_pause>この大-､の平和のために...
>
> Is the priest asking if he can help?
>
> .TEXT
> Can I do anything<$8F571E_pause> to help your
> corps? For peace on this
> continent...
> .ENDT
>
Please use her services as you wish in your corps. For peace on this continent...
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; オレたちは部隊でも
> ; 正義の-｡方でもないんだぜ
>
> Ain sounds negative. (When did he
> become a crusader for justice?)
>
> .TEXT
>
> have anyone in our force
> except friends of justice!
> .ENDT
>
Hold it! We're not a corps, and we're not heroes either!
>
> (New Screen)
> ; <$8F6E00_name>が
> ; 平和の-]だとかなんとか
> ; 勝手にきめつけんなよ
>
> Ain continues, but this makes no sense!
>
> .TEXT
> <$8F6E00_name> can't just scold us
> at will, even taking into
> consideration his love of peace.
> .ENDT
>
Don't try to tell [Name] that he's fighting for peace or some other nonsense.
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; たびは道連れと もうすだろう
> ; はっはっはっ
>
> Priest offers a weird reply to a weird comment.
>
> .TEXT
>
> So you may call him a
> 'fellow traveller' on your
> journey. Hahaha
> .ENDT
>
Come now. Call her a fellow traveller, then. Ha ha ha!
>
> (New Screen)
> ; <$8F6E09_name><$8F571E_pause>
> ; お前もこの男たちの生きざまを
> ; 見てみなさい
>
> The priest speaking to Eris,
> but the translation is odd.
>
> .TEXT
> <$8F6E09_name><$8F571E_pause>
> see if you and these men can
> get along together.
> .ENDT
>
[Name], see how these men live.
>
> (New Screen)
> ; 脱・兵という
> ; -ｼを着た男たちのこん後をな！
>
> Priest makes another vague observation.
>
> .TEXT
> They may have been called
> deserters, but now they are no
> such thing!
> .ENDT
>
See what becomes of these men calling themselves deserters!
>
> (New Screen)
> ; そして...
> ; しんじつを見きわめてみなさい
>
> Priest continues... vague.
>
> .TEXT
> And...
> See everything as it really is.
> .ENDT
>
And...see the truth.
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; しかし 戦うことはままなりません
>
> Eris weighs in with her position, but vague.
>
> .TEXT
>
> wishes...But I am not well with
> the fighting.
> .ENDT
>
As you command...
But I am no fighter.
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; その回復-・@だけでじゅう分じゃよ
>
> Priest opines on Eris's value to the party.
>
> .TEXT
>
> with your recovery magic!
> .ENDT
>
Your healing magic should be more than enough!
>
> (00001252)
> ;
> ; 解放軍でおしみなくカを出し
> ; はたらきなされ
>
> Priest speaking, but what does he mean?
>
> .TEXT
>
> strength with the liberation
> army...
> if you couldn't work with them
> to restore world peace.
> .ENDT
>
Give your all for the Liberation Army for the sake of this world's [garbled].
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; オレたちは正義の-｡方でも
> ; なんでもないんだぜ
>
> Ain asking a vague question...
>
> .TEXT
>
> be labeled as friends of justice!
> .ENDT
Hold it! We're not some kind of heroes!
>
> (New Screen)
> ; <$8F6E00_name>が 平和の
> ; -]だなんて
> ; 勝手にきめつけんなよ！
>
> Ain continues... strange, as translated...
>
> .TEXT
> What if <$8F6E00_name> arbitrarily
> bothers us with his desire for
> world peace!?
> .ENDT
Don't try to tell [Name] that he's fighting for peace or some other nonsense!
>
> (New Screen)
> ;
> ; 生きることをたのしむことじゃ
>
> Priest speaking, unclear what he means.
>
> .TEXT
>
> but you'll just have to enjoy
> being alive, won't you?
> .ENDT
>
Well, that's fine.
You should enjoy your lives.
>
> (New Screen)
> ; 脱・兵という-ｼこそが
> ; おまえさん方に・たえられた
> ; くんしょうだろうて はっはっ
>
> Priest speaking, may make more sense
> with a more clear translation, overall.
>
> .TEXT
> Your group was given the label
> of deserter. You might as well
> wear it like a medal now. Haha
> .ENDT
>
You were branded as deserters. You should wear it like a medal! Ha ha!
>
> (0000130C)
> ;
>
> Ain speaking... again, vague...
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
You're a real optimist, old man...
>
> (New Screen)
> ; どうせ・てなんかないんだ
> ; <$8F6E00_name>よ
> ; 成り行きでいこうぜ
>
> Ain commenting, but vague...
>
> .TEXT
> I guess it won't hurt to try it.
> <$8F6E00_name>.
> Lets just see what happens.
> .ENDT
>
Well, it's not like we have any plans.
[Name], let's just take things as they come.
>
> (New Screen)
> ; オレもお前にうん-ｽを感じるぜ！
>
> Is Ain saying the hero might be special?
>
> .TEXT
> I feel like you might be a lucky
> charm!
> .ENDT
>
>
I can tell you have a destiny!
> (New Screen)
> ;
>
> The hero speaking, but what does "who"
> feel? This is the ending comment in
> the conference with the priest.
>
> .TEXT
>
> .ENDT
>
>
> With this, the party picks up a new member
> and is auto-pulled out of Area-1 into Area-2
> with no reversal.
...Don't lose your head, Ain.
(Jp. literally something like: What are you [saying] so casually...?)